THE ELOQUENT  EDITOR
ANGELA VALENTINE,
PROFESSIONAL EDITOR
B.A. ENGLISH, SUMMA CUM LAUDE
EDITING SERVICES OFFERED

LEVEL ONE: GENERAL PROOFREADING AND COPYEDITING
Spelling and typographical errors
Correct word usage (they're, their, there / its, it's / then, than)
Punctuation / use of quotations / apostrophes and possessives / hyphens and word divisions
Capitalization, proper nouns, names, titles, geographical places
Correct grammar usage / subject-verb agreement / verb tense / adjectives and adverbs
Eliminating redundancy of words / sentence structures / repeating information

LEVEL TWO: DEEPER STRUCTURE EDITING AND WRITING
Replacing weaker words with stronger or more descriptive word choices
Eliminating confusion and increasing clarity
Sentence formation, structure, length, variation, interest
Organizing storyline structure, flow and pace
Flow and transitions between sentences, paragraphs and chapters
Maintaining consistency of narration voice / style / tone
Deepening character development
Increasing descriptive content to heighten movie-like imaginative visualization in reader
Bringing the story to life with a subtle feeling of reality and aliveness
Cliffhangers to entice readers on to subsequent sections
Maintaining reader interest throughout entire book
Graphical page structure and arrangement of text
Front and back information / Table of Contents / Epilogue / Glossary / Appendix / Index
ISBN procurement, Library of Congress application, Copyright documentation

LEVEL THREE: POSSIBLE BONUS MATERIALS
Practical life applications or teachings
Creation of exercises / ceremonies / meditations / hypnosis scripts
Audio content for MP3s or CDs / Reading and voice recording for complete Audio Book

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